Velandria glared at her fellow companions.

"You MUST be joking. We're just going to waltz into the Dark Lord's castle.. in the kingdom of the Gods.. and you think they're not going to FIGUIRE IT OUT just because we're wearing these STUPID outfits!?"

J'hon blushed and twiddled his thumbs looking somewhat nervous.

"Stupid? You.. don't.. like it? I picked it out myself.. I thought it looked really.. uh.. elegant?"

Velandria narrowed her eyes. The rest of the group sucked in there breath in unison, awaiting her next verbal thrashing. To everyones suprise her usual cold expression lightened and a small smile formed, enhancing the natural beauty of her fine elven features. Her usually Porcelain skin was now a slight shade of rosey pink around her cheeks. Silently she approached J'hon to inspect the outfit he was holding. As she looked at it her usual expression returned. Cold, calculating, and contemptuous.

"Fine... but I'm only wearing it if it fits over my armour."


So, me and Lisa ( [link] ) made this story up along time ago. (Prob. when we were around 15-16) Lisa created Velandria while I created J'hon, and we role played out there adventures (along with many other characters) traditional D-n-D style. J'hon was such a fun character that I just kept drawing him and working on him, and eventually made him the star of his own comic "Chaos in the Outer Region" that I now sell at various anime and comic book conventions. With his past and his personality already fleshed out I've only had to concentrate on the story itself and the other characters so far.. but now it's getting to the point in the story where parts of his past are going to become relevant to the story so I've started redesigning the costumes and rewriting the scripts from our past role play adventures, for reference in the 2nd CITOR graphic novel I'm working on. Velandria will make a short guest appearance in one of J'hons dreams/flash backs. (yay for flash backs.)

Anyway, I'm hoping to get some feedback on what you think of this dress design.